The Final Inspection (A poem i found)

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The Final Inspection (A poem i found)

Post by DragnBane » Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:01 am

FINAL INSPECTION

The Soldier stood and faced God
Which must always come to pass
He hoped his boots were shining
Just as bright as his brass.

"Step forward you Soldier,
How shall I deal with you?
Have you always turned the other cheek?
To My Church have you been true?"

The Solider squared his shoulders and said
"No, Lord, I guess I ain't
Because those of us who carry guns
Can't always be a saint.

I've had to work on Sundays
And at times my talk was tough,
And sometimes I've been violent,
Because the world is awfully rough.

But, I never took a penny
That wasn't mine to keep.
Though I worked a lot of overtime
When the bills got just to steep,

And I never passed a cry for help
Though at times I shook with fear,
And sometimes, God forgive me,
I've wept unmanly tears.

I know I don't deserve a place
Among the people here.
They never wanted me around
Except to calm their fears.

If you've a place for me here,
Lord, It needn't be so grand,
I never expected or had too much,
But if you don't, I'll understand."

There was silence all around the throne
Where the saints had often trod
As the Soldier waited quietly,
For the judgement of his God.

"Step forward now, you Soldier,
You've borne your burden well.
Walk peacefully on Heaven's streets,
You've done your time in Hell."

...Author Unknown



lemme know what u think.

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Post by Todtstoy » Tue Sep 27, 2005 9:11 am

I think it is wonderful and speaks the truth about ALL the soldiers all over the world. They fight for what they believe in and to support their people. I believe God has a very special place for them.

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Post by DragnBane » Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:53 pm

i agree, i liked it because i am a soldier...and it makes me feel good to see things like this.

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Post by Panzerfaust » Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:59 pm

Not enough of this floating around.
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Adversity has the effect of eliciting talents, which, in prosperous circumstances, would have lain dormant. -Horace

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Post by Todtstoy » Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:05 pm

DragnBane wrote:i agree, i liked it because i am a soldier...and it makes me feel good to see things like this.
Thank you for taking care of us then DragnBane. Don't you worry.. like the poem says. You have done your time in hell :D

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